Shadows flickering and curling
I see you there,
curled up so tight.
in that little ball,
shaking with fright.
my heart flips,
through the fog I see.
feeling your emotions,
seeing what could be.
the shadows flickering,
curling about you.
offering a pretend comfort,
with deception too.
its feeding off you,
drawing you deeper.
so hard to pull out,
making you a sleeper.
my hand looks blurry,
as it reaches in the haze.
light glowing like a halo,
dancing through the maze.
that glimmer of light,
of possibilities and hope.
your eyes blink uncertainly
and withdraw from my grope.
wanting and hoping,
but doubting too.
no hope, no desire,
in darkness of goo.
a whisper is heard
in that foggy mire.
reach out to me,
for I will never tire.
my whisper echoes,
in the silvery haze.
a smile beckons,
and I catch your gaze.
hope, sparks,
can it be?
is it possible,
maybe?
It is there, reaching out
my hand it is so clear,
filled with a choice,
hope, it is so near.
all it takes is a tiny move,
so I can grasp and tug.
and yank you out.
and give you a hug.
you can do it,
give it a try.
wave your hand,
don’t make me cry.
hope is there,
though it will often hide.
the shadows are strong,
pulling you aside.
those curly dark thoughts.
that invade your space,
toss them aside.
and look into my face,
someone is there,
waiting to reach out.
peek into the light,
from your world of doubt.
Amber
Oh wow. I love this. You are sooo evocative. I love the mood you cast here, rather like its own flickering shadow… I am envious and truly impressed.
I get lost in my words, feel them. And we know what it is like to try to pull someone out. to offer hope. If they just reach back,,, and sad when they don’t.
Oh ber that was so nice. 🙂
Tu es la lumiere d’un ange
awwww 🙂
Absolutely powerful. I loved it. I like the sense of optimism in all that darkness.
Thank you. There is always hope
Nods …. I too thought this was …. nods…trying to figure out what words I wish to use…it was filled with a longing to reach out … and had hope in it. Nods.
Knows when you write certain things tis for a reason. I hope it reaches it’s intended …and that they reach back.
Good work again amber.
Thank you Katie. *hugs* I hope they always reach back
oh Ambers
tu m’as fait pleurer
awwwwww Je suis desolee
Wow! This is absolutely wonderful… Very deep… *hugs ya*
*grins* thank you Chey. I figured out what to blog about today.
Je t’embrasse très fort *winks*
oh wow. Rosetta Stone *giggles*
*hugggggggggggggggs*
This is very powerful Amber, it takes you over, captures you. But it offers such comfort too.
I hope so Jill. 🙂
Thinks this one is touching peoples empathy parts….thinks everyone has been there…whether the reacher outer…or the reachee.
Do you still write poetry?
Sometimes yes.
Well hope you continue to share on occasion. 🙂